Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 17, 2019
My Mind swapping machine
In Reading we read a book about a mind swapping machine, this is my mind swapping machince that I designed. I uesd unicorns becouse they are really cute toys. If you could make a mind swapping what would you make?
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Hi Olivia. I really liked the way you put lots of cool pictures on your slide you taught me lots of information. Next time you could make the writing a bit bigger but well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Logan.